User talk:Maagicalme/sandbox

Peer review
Looks like you're off to a good start! I believe you've added 3,102 bytes. Formatting has improved a lot. Along with some more info, pictures would be nice--maybe try getting a cover or scans of her book? Just one more note that I believe that words in headers aren't supposed to be capitalized all the way through--just the first letter. So "Other Midwifery Manuals" should be "Other midwifery manuals".ErysimumLe (talk) 05:11, 4 June 2014 (UTC)