User talk:Maalikib/sandbox

'''Overall, the additions don't create a bias and maintain neutrality through the article. I think what you're adding to the article is a good start. I agree that the definition needed to be further explained and I think your section can be separated into a different paragraph that explains the characteristics of a NIC. I also think you could add more about how becoming a NIC has transitioned people's lives into better living standards. For the historical context section, I'm not sure how your addition would benefit the article. However, if you further explained the impact of WW2 on the push for industrialization in NICs it would be. -Gaby, peer reviewer'''

Sigarg (talk) 03:01, 3 April 2018 (UTC)

Thanks for the feed back I found it to be very helpful and I will follow your suggestions on making an extra section outline of the characteristics of a NIC as well as better adding more information on WW2. I also want to try to relate my topic to things we have learned in class.--Bashir Maaliki Maalikib (talk) 05:58, 5 April 2018 (UTC)