User talk:Maartaacruz/sandbox

(peer review from alex holbrook) Hello Marta!

I read your draft and I think you have a great start to your article. You picked an article with very little information, and picked out what you want to add and already have headings added for it. You're on a great track, but I think you should find a few more sources to look for more information from. This article is kind of a broad topic and you can cover pretty much whatever you want in it. I found when writing my article statistics and facts from government websites are the best sources. Hopefully my review helps a little bit! Keep up the good work! Holbrook.alex98 (talk) 20:13, 31 July 2018 (UTC)holbrook.alex98

Hi Marta!

I've just read the material in your sandbox and you have started some good additions to this article. Your planned outline is clear and can make a significant difference for the article. My biggest suggestions as you continue improving it are: --continue expanding! There is still a lot that you can add to this article. --review for clarity. There are some statements in here that I can't quite understand (for example, what does it mean to "stock" green card applications? Or what does it mean to limit green cards to 7% per country? 7% of what?). The discussion around points that aren't fully clear yet could be expanded a little for better clarity. --cite sources each time you use material from them. This will be most things you are stating as facts (for example, that it takes 6-12 years to get a green card in the US)

I hope these are somewhat helpful as you continue working on this article. I look forward to seeing what else you add to it! Nicoleccc (talk) 21:20, 29 July 2018 (UTC)

Maria's Peer ReviewEncinas.geralene (talk) 07:50, 31 July 2018 (UTC) Geralene Encinas
Hi Maria! I picked your article to review because I like the topic a lot. After reading it, I noticed some grammar issues that I think can be fixed. I capitalized the ones that I edited. "Immigration Voice is a non-profit organization that helps immigrants, legislative and executive branches of government SOLVE problems in the employment with the green card process due to delays, USCIS processing and Labor Certification.  IMMIGRATION VOICE'S purpose is to improve immigration laws and EMPLOYMENTS WHERE immigrants can enter to the Unites States economy IN A TIMELY MANNER" "A second goal of Immigration Voice is to eliminate "per-country" green cards.  The application for the green card for India, Mexico, China and the Philippines are stocked (REPHRASE IT MAYBE OR ADD MORE SENTENCES TO CLARIFY WHAT YOU MEANT HERE). Green cards are limited to 7% in each country.  So many countries do not meet their annual quota and they do not issue the amount of green cards they are permitted. This is a reason why Immigration Voice is attempting to promote legislation that would change the laws so that COUNTRIES LIKE India AND MEXICO could use green cards from another nation. This will help its citizens get permanent residency in the United States." Just like me, you need to do more research to add more information about your article. I know how hard it is to find information about an article that rarely has information online. Good luck! :)