User talk:Maasai14

Please add a lead section to Draft:Valentine Nkoyo
Hello, your draft went on for at least three paragraphs without ever saying she's an educator. That's not how articles start, they need to have a clear, short introduction explaining what the topic is, like name, when born, where from, why famous, etc. This is not a mystery novel where you need to set a scene first, an article's intro should give the reader the highest points of the article right at the beginning. Please see my comments at top of draft: Draft:Valentine Nkoyo. MatthewVanitas (talk) 04:09, 22 October 2014 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Valentine Nkoyo (November 25)
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Cerebellum (talk) 16:27, 25 November 2014 (UTC)

Draft:Valentine Nkoyo concern
Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Valentine Nkoyo, a page you created, has not been edited in 6 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

If your submission is not edited soon, it could be nominated for deletion. If you would like to attempt to save it, you will need to improve it.

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Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 01:34, 26 May 2015 (UTC)

Draft:Valentine Nkoyo concern
Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Valentine Nkoyo, a page you created, has not been edited in 6 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

If your submission is not edited soon, it could be nominated for deletion. If you would like to attempt to save it, you will need to improve it.

You may request Userfication of the content if it meets requirements.

If the deletion has already occured, instructions on how you may be able to retrieve it are available at WP:REFUND/G13.

Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 01:37, 6 December 2015 (UTC)