User talk:Mabalu/Archives/2016/November

Excuse me
Hi Excuse me if i was agressive. But I would like to prevent you that there are an error. Regards. --Panam2014 (talk) 11:35, 1 November 2016 (UTC)
 * Apology accepted. But I do not understand what you are trying to say in your second sentence. I am afraid that it makes no sense. Mabalu (talk) 19:20, 1 November 2016 (UTC)
 * There are two request. The first is between Pageboy and Bowl cut ans the second is between Bob cut, Dice Bob and Lob (haircut). Regards. --Panam2014 (talk) 21:11, 1 November 2016 (UTC)
 * I am sorry but your merge requests are not very clearly explained. That is why there was confusion. Mabalu (talk) 02:12, 2 November 2016 (UTC)
 * The lob and dice bob are a variant of bob and pageboy is a variant of bowl cut. --Panam2014 (talk) 07:58, 2 November 2016 (UTC)
 * You are not providing a convincing argument for why the articles should be merged, but repeating the same thing over and over again. Personally, when I think of a pageboy haircut, I don't think of a bowl cut at all, but something similar to a long bob, so there is also an element of individual interpretation and opinion to deal with here. If you really think the articles should be merged, then please try to give a more convincing rationale and reason for this on the talk pages. Mabalu (talk) 15:41, 2 November 2016 (UTC)
 * I added sources. --Panam2014 (talk) 21:05, 2 November 2016 (UTC)

PINEDA COVALIN ARTICLE
Hi Mabalu! I´m currently working on an article about a Mexican fashion design brand for my Academic writing and discourse class (User:Thelmadatter/Pineda_Covalin). I found your page and I noticed you are interested in writing about fashion. Because of this I would really appreciate if you could read my work and give me some feeback. As I am not a native English speaker this would help me to improve my article.

Thank you for your consideration!

--Frida Mo. (talk) 17:51, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
 * Frida Mo., hello! I think your article looks very good. Nicely written and well referenced, and the sources look, on a very quick scan, to be valid. It's not a subject I know much about, but I think you did well for your first article. The English is excellent too - I only noticed one strange phrase, where you put "Ricardo Covalín complements the statement" - I would suggest that "supports" would be a better word than "complements." Well done. Mabalu (talk) 19:28, 1 November 2016 (UTC)


 * Thank you a lot for your feedback! I´ve already corrected the strange sentence.

--Frida Mo. (talk) 17:55, 3 November 2016 (UTC)