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Because you have been on for 9 years I thought you'd know a bit; I have this draft called Draft:Dinah (Alice's Adventures in Wonderland) and it's coming along however I can't seem to find any sources on Dinah herself nor do I think my wording is right and I feel as if I haven't added everything correctly. Could you possibly help me improve it? ♠Dinah♠ 🎤 14:14, 15 August 2017 (UTC)
 * Hi, Dinah! I do kind of have to agree with the reviewing editor's comment that I can't see how Alice's kitten deserves her own article, and I am a big Alice in Wonderland fan. I think it might be straining notability a bit. At best, Dinah seems to be very much an incidental character at the beginning and end of the books, and there isn't an awful lot to be written about her. I'd think it is more appropriately merged to the Dinah section in List of minor characters in the Alice series, although the computer game character descriptions don't seem to fit there as well. Sorry I can't be more encouraging, but I do think it is a little bit of a stretch for an individual article. Mabalu (talk) 14:37, 15 August 2017 (UTC)

Si I thought so to. I am trying to keep it up until I have another idea for an article but it made me think; the Griffin wasn't in much as well yet it has a page so I thought: other than the March hare Dinah is my favorite so why not give her a page? Currently I'm trying to work on a Moe Can Change page or something of the sort because I know that the page will not make it, but I am trying my best. However with that other user their review was incorrect (as said by another user). The actual reason it should've been denied was because I did not have any sources. ♠Dinah♠ 🎤 14:39, 15 August 2017 (UTC)
 * Well, the Gryphon has been portrayed by a number of actors and interpretations, and has a speaking role and is often included in the adaptations, so I can see why he would get an article. I don't think the article itself is too great (it needs cites) but the Gryphon (and the Mock Turtle) are pretty famous as a couple in the books, so I can see why there is one. Mabalu (talk) 14:44, 15 August 2017 (UTC)

Eh I guess I can to... But Dinah was as well if you read enough! She was in 2 chapters in the video/computer games as for the books she wasn't in much true but the original not child friendly book of Alice's Adventures in Wonderland she is in apparently and not for a short period of time. Then the movie! She was in the 20th Century movie for over 5 minutes! And with all this research I've been doing I think I should just be making a page on one of the many Alice in Wonderland's. I see what your saying, she isn't very notable but I already have the page so until I am certain I can't improve it what so ever I will keep trying. Unless a CSD tag is put on it. ♠Dinah♠ 🎤 14:50, 15 August 2017 (UTC)

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