User talk:Mabingha

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Death Valley
In this edit you removed a reference, and while you tightened up the prose, you also inserted jargon. I've reverted back to the previous version so that you may try again without taking out the reference, and preferably without using words like "adiabatic" without explaining them.  Acroterion   (talk)   04:25, 1 January 2013 (UTC)