User talk:Mabryl

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I posted my review in the talk section of your post... not sure I should have posted it here or not though. Anyways, I thought it was great: "This is a great page to have started on Wikipedia. I think the opening statement sounds a bit subjective in stating that Clinton's executive order was one of his most significant legislative achievements. It was surely important, but perhaps ranking it among his other legislative achievements is not necessary for Wikipedia. The topic (the post thus far anyways) seems to focus on policy regarding the use of genetic information. Thus, I would suggest possibly changing the title of the page to "Genetic information policy in the United States". Overall, its a great start to the subject!" Fischwrap (talk) 05:22, 10 May 2012 (UTC)

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Genetic Policy section.
Hey good job. I think the federal section is good, and I wouldn't recommend any changes. I think the state section might be improved if you gave more of a sense about how many states have laws such as those you listed.Brswenson (talk) 20:21, 15 May 2012 (UTC)