User talk:Macarroll924/Rhetorical situation

Hi User:Matthewvetter Can you check out my edits to the lead? I'm concerned it might be too much detail for a lead. Should I separate it into an intro paragraph after the lead that is already there? Thanks!
 * Hello - thanks for tagging me and for this question. I don't think it's necessarily too much content, but yes a little too much specificity. The lead should be a little more general in nature and then forecast the main contents of the article. I made some changes to your drafting. I also added another source/discussion of that source so that readers don't get the idea that these discussions were limited to the twentieth century (but are ongoing instead). I have some ideas about organization of the article. I don't think it makes sense to have as major section on these three theorists - but would rather like to see a section that traces more of the scholarly / theoretical development and treats individual theorists as subsections. I put this new structure in your draft as well. Hope this helps! You're doing good work on an important article. DarthVetter (talk) 15:15, 11 March 2021 (UTC)