User talk:Madalinhow/new sandbox

Peer Review
I especially enjoyed how you consistently separated modern beliefs and historic beliefs, and showed how different theories have developed over time. I would suggest adding in a few citations per paragraph, even if it is the same source. Some tips/criticisms: -Maintain 3rd person point of view; instead of "our genetic makeup," saying "genetic makeup" will keep the level of formality you have established. -Reword "Since nature and culture are now viewed as more intertwined than ever before, which makes the divide between the the two seems obsolete." Maybe deleting the words "which makes" would smooth it out.

Overall, your contributions are helpful and informative, but I would just read it over and smooth over a few grammatical errors(adding commas and having consistent pronouns and tenses). --Nayah116 (talk) 23:04, 20 October 2018 (UTC)