User talk:Maddiet37/Centruroides hentzi

Peer Review for Centruroides hentzi article
This is overall very solid and flows very well and logically. The neutral tone throughout and clear delivery of facts makes this easy to read and understand.

I would elaborate a bit further on the sentence that begins with "In Florida, C. hentzi is sympatric...". Is it only in Florida that this species is sympatric with those two other species? How can it be sympatric only in that region? This part made me curious. If you know/can find out, a bit more explanation would be good to add.

In the "Predators" section, I would add the common names of the two predators you listed in addition to their scientific names.

I like the continued use of the scientific name of the scorpion, and how it is abbreviated after it is established to keep things concise. I'll see if I can do something similar with my own article.

You definitely met the 3 citation requirement, and they appear to be correctly cited in the text. Good job with that.

Overall this is epic, very good job. Invertebrate Zoology (talk) 15:34, 30 October 2023 (UTC)