User talk:Madelinehartman

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Hello, Madelinehartman, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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ENGW 3307 Week 1
Hi Madeline, I'm Maryam! I'm in the same class as you and am testing out communicating via your Talk page. Maryamattar (talk) 09:19, 11 May 2018 (UTC)

Hi Maryam! Looks great. Madelinehartman (talk) 23:54, 15 May 2018 (UTC)

Hello Madeline, I'm Peyton and giving a peer review of your article.

Good job with the lead in. You explained well who he is and his primary work. However, I would consider linking more of the topics you've mentioned here to the relevant wikipedia article.

The main body of your article is organized well and all your points are cited. But, it looks like you're still working towards fleshing it out fully and increasing the number of references. Looks like you're making good progress though. I would suggest including images in the future, how about something related to his research or a picture of him?

Your references are good, though it wouldn't hurt to add a few more.

Overall, I think your article is making good progress and will be great once you finish. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Psayasith (talk • contribs) 17:48, 17 June 2018 (UTC)

AfC notification: User:Madelinehartman/sandbox has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at User:Madelinehartman/sandbox. Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 21:00, 23 June 2018 (UTC)

AfC notification: User:Madelinehartman/sandbox has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at User:Madelinehartman/sandbox. Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 21:01, 23 June 2018 (UTC)