User talk:Madelynnelyse1

Mela Lee's article
Your rewrite of the lead paragraph for Mela Lee's article puts too much emphasis on the video game companies rather than her actual roles. Also, statements such as 50 game franchises are extraordinary claims that are not supported by the article. If you want to elaborate on her contributions to the video game franchises, you should expand her biography and provide sources that her roles are significant there. Only the most significant roles should be mentioned in the lead. See Tara Strong or Yuri Lowenthal for examples. AngusWOOF ( bark  •  sniff ) 19:42, 22 June 2018 (UTC)