User talk:Madgrimm

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After looking at the "Workplace Mentoring" Wikipedia page, I thought there were some good aspects to it, but there was plenty of room for improvement. The following is a list of possible ways to improve the page:
 * •The way the page was organized, with the different sections was a good concept but not executed well. For example, the history section isn’t really about the history of workplace mentoring, rather, it is a very brief paragraph saying the concept has grown.
 * •The “examples of workplace mentoring” section listens different types or categories of workplace mentoring, but no real world examples. I think real world examples would be extremely beneficial and would add depth to the page.
 * •The Effects section is incomplete and should not be a subtitle under history. I like the pros and cons section and maybe effects should be combined with the pros and cons?
 * •There should be examples of informal and formal mentoring. We should also discuss the benefits and drawbacks of both in their respective sections.
 * •Some definitions and explanations lack citations and need to be confirmed.
 * •In the first paragraph, it says mentoring can be done in two ways – informal and formal – but later on the page additionally describes relational mentoring and reverse marketing.
 * •The definition of workplace mentoring is taken from a training manual from Vantage Financial Consultants.
 * •The sources regarding the pros and cons are quite old and probably could be updated. Some pros and cons seem more like opinions and not facts.

Madgrimm (talk) 05:11, 15 February 2018 (UTC)