User talk:Madilyn.campbell.68

Roller derby
Hello and welcome to Wikipedia! You edited this article and User:Widr undid your edit. I think there are several issues with your edit.
 * You inserted "' ' 'Bold text' ' '" into the page, a sign that you at least touched the boldfacing button unintentionally. If you really want to add bold text to a page, what you should do next is change "Bold text" to the text you want bolded, but if you don't, you should delete everything you added.
 * Your other edits strike me as a good-faith effort to tell a more complete story about roller derby. However, I recently rewrote the entire article, and it is important not to try to tell the whole story in the Intro.  Several of your edits add information that the article gets around to, later, in the correct place.
 * One of your new passages, "There is two 30 minute periods in one game which you call a bout." has bad grammar ("There is...periods") and a tone that is not right for an encyclopedia ("which you call"). Again, the article gives this information, but in a place I thought was better for it.

The bottom line is that you should read an entire article (and even the discussion page) before jumping in to improve it.

Widr interpreted this edit as vandalism and blocked your account. I will ask him to reconsider this. Spike-from-NH (talk) 23:15, 9 December 2018 (UTC)