User talk:MadisonKendall123

Your submission at Articles for creation: Ruth Sherman Tolman (June 1)
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Robert McClenon (talk) 03:40, 1 June 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Ruth Sherman Tolman (June 1)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Ruth Sherman Tolman and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Ruth_Sherman_Tolman Articles for creation help desk] or on the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:Robert_McClenon&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Ruth_Sherman_Tolman reviewer's talk page].
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Robert McClenon (talk) 14:03, 1 June 2016 (UTC)

Ruth Tolman
Please explain what you are doing with Draft:Ruth Sherman Tolman. She appears to be notable, but the article has tone and style issues, which can be improved with work. However, you then moved the article twice, once to article space, and then to User:Ruth Tolman. A move in user space to a space not associated with a user account is normally not appropriate, since she is not a user. If the page is not intended for article space, what is it intended for? There is a note "high school project", but see WP:Student assignments and Wikipedia is not a web host. The goal of student assignments should be either the improvement of existing articles or the production of new articles, in this case, the production of a new article. Please explain. Robert McClenon (talk) 14:26, 1 June 2016 (UTC)
 * Never mind. You created useless redirects, which I am tagging for speedy deletion.  The draft article should stay where it is, and you are encouraged to improve its tone to make it neutral.  Robert McClenon (talk) 15:20, 1 June 2016 (UTC)