User talk:Madisondaoust

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Hello, Madisondaoust, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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A goat for you!
I like the way the paragraphs are split up, it makes the article section much easier to read. I did notice that both the first and second paragraphs mention Hawaii as a melting pot. I don’t think it’s necessary to mention it in both sections, so I would probably just mention that Hawaii is known as the melting pot in the first paragraph and then just say “Hawaii provides a vibrant, wide array of styles and mediums for art creations and workings.” in the second paragraph.

Laurenk17 (talk) 01:07, 10 March 2020 (UTC) 

A goat for you!
Hi Madi! I think what you had to say was really informational about your topic. However, your edits seem to be missing some links so that way we (as readers) know what website you are using aside from your source citings.

ChloeM99 (talk) 20:56, 23 March 2020 (UTC) 