User talk:Madsngo/White coffee/Aliylo Peer Review

Hi,

I hope that you are having a good evening! I thought that this was a good start. I would make sure to include citations for all of the facts, a sentence or two blurb above the first heading, and make sure to double check some of the grammar: However, it appears that a lot of the mistakes are from the original stub, so I am assuming that you just have not had the time yet.

Overall, good job! I really like the topic you chose.

Aliylo (talk) 06:51, 28 January 2020 (UTC)