User talk:Maestrodelcastillo

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Welcome to Wikipedia! I'd like to discuss your contribution style. Let's look at this edit.

It's not a style you would find in an encyclopedia. It sounds too promotional. Think about what it would say in Britannica. "X has a band, and it won the Y award." It sounds drier and factual.

Thanks, WhisperToMe (talk) 06:18, 17 October 2014 (UTC)