User talk:Maggiehoang/London fog (beverage)

Feedback on your article
I've made a small number of edits to the article. You can look at the history and compare the versions to look at what I've changed. I removed the bit about drinking hot beverages because it seems too general of a concern to really belong on the article about London Fog.

You should take a look at this list of suggestions for polishing your article which is helpful. Do a final pass and try to address any of those things that you think are useful. Then feel free to go ahead and start moving your content over into the main namespace. Good luck! — m a k o ๛  23:40, 13 February 2020 (UTC)


 * Also, you can probably remove that little template at the top that says the article relies on a single source. Also also, you should look at the tags that say "by whom" and "citation needed" and make sure you add citations for that. There's a weird situation in the article where one part says that the article is believed to have been created in Vancouver and another part says it was. Which is it? The article should at least be consistent. — m a k o ๛  23:41, 13 February 2020 (UTC)