User talk:Maggiehoang/sandbox

Hi,

I hope that you are having a good day! I really liked your topic as this is one of my favorite drinks! I would suggest double-checking to make sure that all facts are cited with sources, adding photographs, and making sure to link the first reference of a "definition word" to another wikipedia page. This could include words like "milk," "bergamot,""caffeine," "esophageal cancer," etc. Additionally, I like how you included the precautions section. It may be a nice idea to talk about how a London fog is made under the production/sale header and about how the drink rose in popularity under the history part?

Good job! I enjoyed learning more about London fogs!

Aliylo (talk) 07:12, 28 January 2020 (UTC)