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Great research! I would definitely recommend rephrasing the multiple quotes you have here before adding them to the articl. Sylipen (talk) 20:16, 25 March 2019 (UTC)

You've got a lot of great information so far! The most interesting information that I read was the discussion at the end of the difference in the emergence of art for the common people rather than rich patrons and royalty. You describe the difference in quality which I think is a really interesting and important aspect to discuss and make sure Wikipedia readers understand. One suggestion I have would be to maybe create a central, unifying theme to tie all of your information together. It all looks great but I feel it could be a bit more clear specifically what section of the article you are editing to make sure all of the info fits. Otherwise, everything looks great! Maddyz1415 (talk) 14:30, 15 March 2019 (UTC)