User talk:Maggiep/sandbox

Will's Peer review
This seems really well written to me. The wording is concise and accessible, yet all the facts are present. These are my few suggested changes. Let me know if you have any questions.

I think your heading could just be "cultural responses" I don't see a real need to mention scapegoating in the title — Preceding unsigned comment added by 1will i am1 (talk • contribs) 17:03, 27 February 2018 (UTC)

Change "largely of whom" to "many of which" or something similar in the second paragraph

Was christianity ever not the official religion in Western Europe? third paragraph

Kendra's Peer Review
Consistency for capitalization of Little Ice Age. I think there could also be a better transition to the second paragraph of the socio-political turmoil section. Otherwise, great information! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Weinrichks (talk • contribs) 16:57, 27 February 2018 (UTC)

Sarah's Peer Review
Overall, I think the information is presented in an unbiased and fair way with cultural response being taken into account for both those who oversaw the trials and those who were victims. I think that the citations are well balanced and reliable, and I think the general tone is well done. The only thing are a few grammar errors, otherwise the information is great.Scheckelse (talk) 17:01, 27 February 2018 (UTC)