User talk:Magzy2001/sandbox/insert madonna of the magnificat

1. You have a good start for lead section/history. I believe you should add information about Sandro Botticelli, where is he from? How did he grow up? How did he have an influence in the Renaissance? Where did he obtain his style from/ Who taught him?

2. You have a very clear structure. Sections are labeled very clear & so are subsections.

3. When I read through your wikipedia article, I feel like there is a lot of information missing. Try adding more information about Sandro Botticelli, find more history of the painting, instead of saying "It is not known".

4. You did very well keeping the article neutral and not being bias.

5. All your sources check out to be reliable but reference #1 leads to a "dead link". It will not open the webpage.

I think you have a very good start/outline. I feel there should be a lot more information in each section added. Make the reader learn something out of the article. Give background/History of Botticelli, give more information about the painting. Try to do deeper research to find the information needed.

Thank you for your time,

Alfonso Linarez — Preceding unsigned comment added by Alinarez (talk • contribs) 18:35, 21 October 2020 (UTC)