User talk:Mahakshkotdawala/sandbox

Peer View of Article
Your lead was put together pretty well. I changed some sentences around to make them more neutral towards the audience of your page. I also added a "references" title above your citations. Your citations looked solid from my standpoint. I would continue to add to your article by outlining the areas of interest for your language, particularly the grammatical and phonology parts. Overall, your language is very interesting and has the potential for a good article. Good luck! - Dan