User talk:Maider.deemiliodiaz/sandbox

Overall I thought your article was really well written. I can definitely tell that you took the time to research your topic on date rape. One area that I would look into for your final draft is writing to Wikipedia standards. For instance "The criminal justice system forces the victim to describe the sexual assault in detail in order to be able to make a decision in court, ignoring the possibility that the trial can create a hostile environment and be a disturbing moment for the victim." Mainly the second half of the sentence doesn't provide facts for a Wikipedia article. I understand what you are trying to say and I agree with it but, Wikipedia is an encyclopedia and fact based. I like how you also divided your headings of date rape. They went from explaining what it was in detail, to punishments and talking about the justice system, victims, and what someone could do to stop it from happening in the future. Great job!