User talk:Makent10/sandbox

I think you should delete "==edit=="

"doesn't" in first sentence should be "don't"

"starts" in second sentence should be "started"

"her self" in second sentence should be "herself"

"make" in second sentence should be "made"

"more understanding " in the final sentence I am not sure that is correct.LiRuiQing (talk) 20:23, 17 February 2015 (UTC)

You need organize your article and to make a paragraph 3. LupithaGarcia (talk) 18:25, 19 February 2015 (UTC)

The problems of your NPOV article
You just point out the problems of the article, but do not change anything in the article. Alice