User talk:Malak8462000/sandbox

Peer Review YK
I really like the amount of information you have and all the sources too. Since you are adding to an existing article, I think you honestly have a sufficient amount of information. Another thing, I like the diction of your article as it is not very biased or leaning towards one side more than the other. The only con I could see here was the amount of sources. For the amount of information you have, I think it would be beneficial to diversify your sources, even if a single sentence was from a different website. Good work Lavarball13 (talk) 04:33, 18 October 2022 (UTC)