User talk:Malba490/sandbox

Lopez additions comments
Hiya. This is looking very nice! One thing right off the bat that you'll want to do is provide some sources backing up your assertion in the intro that her work is controversial. Even if you expand later in the article, it's good to have one or two sources here. Also, unless there is a very important reason, I would leave off mention of her spouse until the main article below. You might consider adding a brief "Personal" section including her marriage as well as any other stuff like where she lives, kids, other hobbies, etc. Also, this is optional, but I might consider having the sections for each of the works be a subsection of a section called (something like) "Notable works". This way, her works are gathered into one section, which is then separated from other stuff like her early life/personal life/etc. We can discuss in class :) Girona7 (talk) 21:10, 14 January 2015 (UTC)