User talk:Malik.138/sandbox

Feedback: You have made 3 nice suggestions to the talk page. I would have like them to be a little more in depth, namely by referring somewhere to specific evolutionary selection pressures. Same with your addition to the main page. The addition flows well, but specifically, what selection pressures are thought to have led to the wings? Instead, you just say the environment is difficult. Also, in your talk comments you mention "need" as an evolutionary force. You should not mention what organisms need, as it implies forward-thinking in evolution. Mholding70 (talk) 14:02, 19 October 2014 (UTC)