User talk:Malik diaw/sandbox

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= Abraham's Peer Review =

= Lead Section = Your additions to the lead section has helped made it a good summary of the topic. I, however, encourage you to revise the last sentence that you added (I think it has a bit of typo in it). Overall, well done with your addition to the lead section.

=Structure = Overall, your structures are well organized and meaningful. There are few ( very few typos) in both the last sentence additions you made in the Introduction section and the Supply and Demand Section. Well done,and I encourage you to stretch yourself further with the structure of your additions/sentences.

= Coverage = I like the fact that you were specific regarding which countries in West Africa you were writing about. However, the article in general can improve its specificity and also its coverage of the various countries in West Africa. I also believe the article mostly covers Drug Trade in West Africa from at least last 2 decades old/ago. I therefore encourage to you expand on the article so that it covers more years ( more specifically, within the last decade).

=Content= The general tone of the article and your additions are neutral, I encourage you to keep that up when making further edits. I also understand that West Africa and most Africa countries are mostly transit points for drug deals but I think a section or two that focuses on Drug Production/Cultivation in West Africa and also Drug Use in West African countries and or West Africa in general will help balance not only the coverage of the topic but the content as well.

= Sources = Most of the statements/claims in the article are not cited and though you cited your statements, I think you should stretch yourself by citing every statement/claim you added as well as increase the variety of your sources.

You did a good job so far and I encourage you to keep it up. All the best with the rest of the assignment/edits. Amartey15 (talk) 08:14, 7 April 2019 (UTC)