User talk:Malikaa1230/sandbox

Hey, this is Jasmine (my sandbox is https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:JasDuran74/sandbox)but I fixed your references so now your citations will show. Please go check out my sandbox and peer review my Wikipedia article additions, I provide links to the Wikipedia articles I have edited so my contributions are really easy to find. --JasDuran74 (talk) 05:28, 8 December 2013 (UTC)

Just as a note, it is unclear exactly what contributions you have made to the Manhattan Project section on the Maria Goeppert-Mayer article based on your sandbox, but if I am not mistaken I believe you made the following contribution to that article:

When the nearby Argonne National Laboratory was founded on July 1, 1946, Goeppert-Mayer was also offered a part-time job there as a senior physicist in the Theoretical Physics Division. She responded "I don't know anything about nuclear physics."

Which I have changed to the following to make the sentences flow a little bit better.

When the nearby Argonne National Laboratory was founded on July 1, 1946, Goeppert-Mayer was offered a part-time job as a senior physicist in the Theoretical Physics Division. She is quoted as responding to this job offer with, "I don't know anything about nuclear physics."--JasDuran74 (talk) 04:52, 9 December 2013 (UTC)

For your addition to the Career and Academic Contributions sections on the Margaret W. Rossiter wiki article, I corrected small punctuation errors and linked the phrase glass ceiling to an existing wiki page because I felt it was relevant. --JasDuran74 (talk) 05:45, 9 December 2013 (UTC)

Lastly for the Social and Political Reform section on the Hottentot Venus page, I was able to link the Slave Trade Act 1807 to an existing wiki page. I also corrected some punctuation, grammar, and spelling errors. But the most significant change you will notice is that I changed Hottentot to Baartman. I believe it is better to refer to the Hottentot Venus as Hottentot Venus or by Sara's last name Baartman.--JasDuran74 (talk) 05:45, 9 December 2013 (UTC)