User talk:Mallory.senio

Additions to Animal navigation
Hi, welcome to Wikipedia, and thanks for your additions to the Animal navigation article: I assume you're probably a student doing a project? Good luck with it. I already edited your first round of additions for style and length, which I had hoped might give you a clue to the desired style and level of detail that might be appropriate in the article. For example, I removed the underlined subheadings, which we don't use. My main feeling about the additions is however very simple: it's too much on one subtopic, and it's (grossly) unbalancing the article. Since the material may be of interest to readers, I will split off the section as a new article, leaving a summary behind, with a "main article" link to the new article from the existing one. All the best, Chiswick Chap (talk) 19:22, 9 December 2015 (UTC)


 * Ok, I've moved the section pretty much as you left it to "Sun compass in animals" - it needs tidying up but I doubt anyone will try deleting it. Please note the following:


 * avoid putting HTML markup into articles, e.g. &nb-sp;
 * use ===My heading name=== equals signs to create subsection headings: avoid using underscore, boldface etc.
 * avoid linking straight to the outside world from the text; put links in references, or list them at the end in an "External links" section. Chiswick Chap (talk) 20:34, 9 December 2015 (UTC)