User talk:Mallory1230/sandbox

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Good job adding to the article, a lot of the information is extremely beneficial and important to include. We are concerned that the information added does not include anything on the epidemiology of Anterior cruciate ligament tears and injuries; What are the prevalence and incidence rates of ACl tears among different age groups and between different ethnicities? What are the risk differences of ACL tears between men and women?

You have a lot of duplicate references. Make sure to recite the references you already have instead of creating new citations. Make sure your references are from a legitimate source (.edu, .org, studies, clinical reviews, etc.).

Additionally, make sure to check for spelling errors before publishing. Rose Vanserra (talk) 19:04, 19 November 2018 (UTC)

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The "introduction" and the "purpose" could be combined into one, making the explanation of the ACL more cohesive. As noted, the page is lacking an Epidemiology section. Information on prevalence and incidence would be appropriate to pull from other areas of the Wiki article. Additionally, the information under "ACL in Women" could be added to an "Epidemiology" section with numerical values/statistic values on women experiencing ACL damage. Overall, the edits are valuable to the information in the article. Consider pooling the statistic information into an "Epidemiology" section. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 137.28.231.178 (talk) 23:57, 26 November 2018 (UTC)