User talk:Malowijs

Peer Review
Suggestions Besides the unfinished nature of the article, it looks really good. The writing is strong and clear. However, the structure of the outline is not quite right. I believe The Native American Policy of the Richard Nixon Administration is the title of your article, but it is instead written as a heading. If it was the title, it would not make sense to have background and special message to congress on Indian affairs as subsections. It is also Wikipedia style to make the first word in a sections or article title to be capital, but the following words lowercase. For example: “Termination policy” not “Termination Policy.” Under termination policy, “policy line” may be an unknown term for some readers. This sentence (What had been initiated as an attempt at assimilation into American society had evolved into a systematic removal of Indian autonomy) should probably be rewritten to remove the use of “what.” I would also add links to other pages in your article, especially to presidents. When adding citations, it may be easier to use visual editor and use the “re use citation” function to avoid a repetitive list. Agardn9520 (talk) 03:39, 6 April 2015 (UTC)