User talk:Mama Doom

Bionik Brown
A tag has been placed on Bionik Brown, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done because the article seems to be about a person, group of people, band, club, company, or web content, but it does not indicate how or why the subject is notable (see the guidelines for notability here). If you can indicate why the subject of this article is notable, you may contest the tagging. To do this, please add  on the top of the page and leave a note on the article's talk page explaining your position. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag yourself.

Please read the criteria for speedy deletion (specifically, articles #7) and our general biography criteria. Feel free to leave a note on my talk page if you have any questions about this.

You can use a Wikipedia "User" page instead. JRHorse 04:42, 28 November 2006 (UTC)

Issues with the article
You don't need to "beef up" the article, it needs a total rewrite.

This is an encyclopedia. It's not for advertising or promotion. It is for accurate, impartial factual information. Was he actually born with chips in his head? No? Then get rid of that stuff. Was he born with titanium in his skeleton? Get rid of it.

Start from scratch. What can you say that is absolutely, literally true? There's hardly a word in the article that's acceptable in an encyclopedia. Also, everything must be Verifiable from third-party Reliable Sources. Keep that in mind. Fan-1967 05:00, 28 November 2006 (UTC)