User talk:Mandr009/sandbox

This article uses too much words for simple descriptions. It should have the actual pictures posted on the article rather than linked to it. The citations are incorrect and the information goes a bit off topic. It should expand on the four classes of Cisterna. The article contains plagiarism. It also needs clarifications regarding the cisternae going through the Golgi apparatus. The article should include how cisternae is formed. It also includes the authors personal opinion rather than a neutral tone. --Mandr009 (talk) 04:12, 13 October 2021 (UTC)Mandr009 10.13.21