User talk:Mangakjd/How to Seduce a Vampire

I'm not sure if my writing style is appropriate. I'd like feedback if possible. (forgot to sign) Mangakjd (talk) 03:56, 6 April 2011 (UTC)
 * You will want to include some secondary sources; so far the only source is the book itself. The writing style seems fine, but content wise the article could probably be improved with a section on the reception of the book by critics (much of the article is WP:INUNIVERSE. You could consider submitting the article at articles for creation if you wanted a more focused review; let me know if you have any questions. Regards! VQuakr (talk) 03:10, 5 April 2011 (UTC)
 * Hi, thanks for the feedback. I updated the article with secondary sources. Mangakjd (talk) 03:56, 6 April 2011 (UTC)