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Noah Talamantes' Peer Review
Corruption in Uganda

Sandbox:

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"...Add more to the intro Add more reliable sources Explain in depth the different types of corruptions Find policies that were put in place to combat corruption What was the cause to corruption in Uganda? What are the groups that are participating in corruption How has corruption effected the economy"

Expand on specific types of corruption that occurred such as public funds.
 * Corruption in Uganda:

Apply political context to the topic. Does a spoils-system and patronage networks exist in the political sphere>

Identify key figures and dates.

Lacks a concise, organized chronological layout

What makes Uganda specifically significant in the topic of corruption? Identify international actors and offer a global context for your topic. What historical period or conflicts instigated corruption in the country?

Overall: Lacks overview and organization. Needs more evidence and information. Include dates and subtopics. Article lacks context.