User talk:Mantifa12345/Freshwater Shoreline Management Programs/Michael Recycle Peer Review

Perhaps change the comma to a colon (denoting a list) in your opening statement --> Anthropogenic effects on lakes, such as: fresh water...

I think the inclusion of 'Love Your Lakes' is really effective and important. By providing an example of your topic, it allows the reader to understand what the actual process, scale, and subsequent results may look like. Your neutrality throughout is evident.

The reference links I clicked on (reference 2, 9 and the hyperlink for the 'Ontario Shoreline Management Plan') all worked.

The structure of your article easily allows other authors to add onto your work, which is really important on this crowd-sourced platform.

--Michael Recycle (talk) 19:31, 22 April 2021 (UTC)Michael Recycle