User talk:Manvely/Vroman effect/Bsien002 Peer Review

Lead is concise and has introductory sentence. Brief description is also included

Content is relevant to the topic. From my perspective, it does not seem like there is missing content.

Tone is neutral and does not have multiple viewpoints.

Tested out sources and the links seem to work fine.

Just a more grammatical question, not sure if this sentence sounds right in the leads section: "The process is delayed in narrow spaces and on hydrophobic surfaces, fibrinogen is usually not displaced."

Sections are individually organized.

Overall impression, the article covers the basic idea behind vroman effect. It covers the mechanisms of how proteins create the vroman effect.

No pictures.

I want to say to cover a bit more information in the mechanism section. Also showing the mathematical model would be useful.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

manvely

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vroman_effect https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vroman_effect
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Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead is concise and has introductory sentence. Brief description is also included

Content is relevant to the topic. From my perspective, it does not seem like there is missing content.

Tone is neutral and does not have multiple viewpoints.

Tested out sources and the links seem to work fine.

Just a more grammatical question, not sure if this sentence sounds right in the leads section: "The process is delayed in narrow spaces and on hydrophobic surfaces, fibrinogen is usually not displaced."

Sections are individually organized.

Overall impression, the article covers the basic idea behind vroman effect. It covers the mechanisms of how proteins create the vroman effect.

No pictures.

I want to say to cover a bit more information in the mechanism section. Also showing the mathematical model would be useful.