User talk:Maofukada

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Hello, Maofukada, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Feedback of "Water Crisis in Iran"
The Lead is sort of short, but it is not a big issue because the article is also sort of short as well. The information is divided into subsections in a way such that the information is easy to follow. Despite the fact that the article seems short, it seems to have a decent amount of sources, which makes the information on the article seem strong. However, it is unclear where the information in the "Political Climate" section comes from in the last statement. I also believe that the "Protests" section could use a little more work. Kylevillegas (talk) 07:18, 20 November 2019 (UTC)