User talk:Maofukada/sandbox

Water Crisis in Iran Feedback The beginning of this article is great, referring to the two mechanisms: physical (absolute) water scarcity and economic water scarcity. Also, it is easy for an audience to grasp the issue because it clarifies the factors of high climatic variability, poor distribution of water, and prioritization of economic development. However, the article does not describe those three factors in detail, which I thought it would be great if you can organize the article presenting the three arguments clearly by creating the sub-sections.

The sources are overall good, but Wikipedia Commons might not be a good source for the Wikipedia article. You may want to use different sources.

Thank you for your effort! HyperDockDuet (talk) 20:10, 16 November 2019 (UTC)HyperDockDuet (talk) 17:44, 20 November 2019 (UTC)