User talk:Maorigrl wiki

Hello, friend
Your new article is astonishingly good, particularly for a first contribution. Keep it up!

You might want to go back and at the very top, above your first headline, write one or two or three brief sentences summarizing the article. It needs to have that done. Also, I think you might be advised to give the Maori word in parentheses and the English word in the main text, rather than vice-versa as you do here and there.

Best regards! Carrite (talk) 23:52, 6 April 2010 (UTC)