User talk:Maparecida/sandbox

In your fourth citation you make the statement "In addition, religious was involvement enabled patients to feel like a family, so patients had faith and trust ." The first part, grammatically doesn't make sense to me, perhaps religion was involved instead. The second part seems like a claim to me by saying they had faith and trust just because they included religion. Your fifth citation says "was a mental health facility on Philadelphia in 1813", perhaps In Philadelphia. In number 6 "Inspired by Tuke's facility, prison, like Walnut Street", prisons? Add an S.