User talk:Mar2203/Child development

Peer Review
Hello! I really like the information you plan on adding to the article. The article overall seems to be well written within the parameters of a wikipedia page, the only thing missing in my opinion is more information on the topic. Look forward to seeing it progress 5150EditWiki (talk) 19:54, 1 April 2023 (UTC)


 * Thank you for the feedback! Is there any specific area where you think the topic needs to be addressed better? Mar2203 (talk) 16:30, 13 April 2023 (UTC)
 * I noticed the "Cognitive/Intellectual" portion in the "Aspects" topic had a note that said it needed some expansion and I would agree with that. However the information you are adding will already benefit the article and you could save the other portion for future editors! 5150EditWiki (talk) 23:05, 14 April 2023 (UTC)

Peer Review
Hello! I really like the information you just added for your Wikipedia page. The information and explanation looks well-structured and organized, and also specific enough to understand about the topic. The only problem about it, in my opinion, is the evidence (like data, percentage, etc.) about "cognitive/intellectual" paragraphs. If you want to add more in that portion, you can, it's just my opinion because evidence could give you even more stronger points to the topic and helps the readers to understand that it's not misinform or wanting to know the proof of your explanation clearly. B2fjbL103 (talk) 16:32, 17 April 2023 (UTC)