User talk:Mara.ispas

Your submission at Articles for creation: Henley & Partners (February 24)
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jcc (tea and biscuits) 17:48, 24 February 2016 (UTC)

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Speedy deletion nomination of Draft:Henley & Partners


A tag has been placed on Draft:Henley & Partners, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, product, group, service or person and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and FAQ/Organizations for more information.

If you think this page should not be deleted for this reason, you may contest the nomination by visiting the page and clicking the button labelled "Contest this speedy deletion". This will give you the opportunity to explain why you believe the page should not be deleted. However, be aware that once a page is tagged for speedy deletion, it may be removed without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag from the page yourself, but do not hesitate to add information in line with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. If the page is deleted, and you wish to retrieve the deleted material for future reference or improvement, then please contact the deleting administrator. Jimfbleak - talk to me?  12:20, 7 April 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Henley & Partners Visa Restrictions Index (April 14)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Onel5969 was:

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 Onel 5969  TT me 12:00, 14 April 2016 (UTC)

Reply
Hi, please read the following carefully. As well as being highly promotional, your article
 * did not provide adequate independent verifiable sources to enable us to verify the facts and show that it meets the notability guidelines. Sources that are not acceptable include those linked to the company, social media and other sites that can be self-edited, blogs, websites of unknown or non-reliable provenance, and sites that are just reporting what the company claims or interviewing its management. Most of your references were to your own sites, press releases or sales sites like Amazon
 * You are so busy telling us how wonderful the company is, you don't show why it meets the notability criteria. You give an unsourced number of emplyees, but no profits or turnover
 * You have a conflict of interest when editing this article, and you must declare it. If, after reading the information about notability linked above, you still believe that your organisation is notable enough for a Wikipedia article (and that there is significant coverage in reliable, independent secondary sources), you could, if you wish, post a request at Requested articles for the article to be created. See also Best practices for editors with conflicts of interest.
 * The nature of your edits gives the impression you are employed directly or indirectly by the company and therefore have a financial stake in promoting this topic. Paid advocacy is a category of conflict of interest (COI) editing that involves being compensated by a person, group, company or organization, directly or indirectly, to use Wikipedia to promote their interests. Paid advocacy is prohibited by our policies on neutral point of view and what Wikipedia is not. Paid advocates are very strongly discouraged from direct article editing, and should instead propose changes on the talk page of the article in question if an article exists, and if it does not, from attempting to write an article at all. At best, any proposed article creation should be submitted through the articles for creation process, rather than directly.Regardless, if you are paid directly or indirectly by the company you are writing about, you are  required by the Wikimedia Terms of Use to disclose your employer, client and affiliation. You can post such a mandatory disclosure to your user page at User:. The template Paid can be used for this purpose – e.g. in the form:    . Please do not edit further until you respond to this message.

I will shortly post the deleted text here and then edit out the worst of the spam. Please do not restore it or it will be permanently deleted. Note that the edited version will still need work to be acceptable Jimfbleak - talk to me?  12:06, 20 April 2016 (UTC)

Paid editing
A simple Google search shows that you are a paid employee of Henley & Partners, and therefore in accordance with Wikipedia's policy on paid editing, you are required to disclose this. The easiest way to do this is to post on your userpage, User:Mara.ispas a disclosure of the form "I am an employee of Henley & Partners" and am being paid to create an article on Henley & Partners Visa Restrictions Index."

Until you make such a disclosure, any edits you make are in violation of Wikipedia's Terms of Use, and so your draft article will not be accepted. Joseph2302 (talk) 17:30, 25 April 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Henley & Partners Visa Restrictions Index has been accepted
 Henley & Partners Visa Restrictions Index, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! Joseph2302 (talk) 17:10, 26 April 2016 (UTC)
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Comments
Somme comments
 * Note that the article title should be just "Henley & Partners. We don't include LTd, LLC, Corp, Pvt or similar. Doesn't matter here, but fix it when you move to article space.
 * headings should follow normal capitalisation, eg "Social responsibility"
 * One of your refs needs fixing, and there is another that's a bare url
 * I'd be inclined to lose all those one paragraph subsections. Lots of second level headings looks messy and "shopping list" appearance looks spammy
 * Although the tone is better, it's still all about what you sell, little about the company. From your draft, I don't know if you have two employees or 2,000. You talk about "The companies of the group" only in passing. I understand that Jersy-based companies are famously secretive, but I think it's a problem that you can tell us nothing about the company (group?) beyond what it sells.
 * Avoid weasel words like "innovative" "independent" and "distinguished". That's particularly the case when your secrecy means we have no way of even having an opinion on whether your award body is either independent or distinguished

Although it's better, if it were in article space I would be inclined to speedy delete again. We have no indication of why the company is notable other than you telling us it is, and without any real factual content, it boils down to "this is what we sell". I'll be interested to see what the Draft reviewer says (I don't think it's in your interest for me to do a formal review. Jimfbleak - talk to me?  12:29, 29 April 2016 (UTC)

More
I think your changes to the history are a retrograde measure Jimfbleak - talk to me?  16:04, 29 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Easy bit: While its origins date back more than 45 years&mdash; better to give a starting year as the time elapsed will become dated
 * The real problem is that we now have a COI editor littering an article with loaded terms, despite my comments above &mdash;small but successful... becoming an expert... placing Henley & Partners ahead of all its competitors... The program's success... Following the success...&mdash; whether you think these terms are justified or not, you are not the person to make those judgements, and you are effectively saying to passing admin "please delete this". Draft space gives some protection, but texts can still be speedy deleted if they stray too far.

Your submission at Articles for creation: Henley & Partners Ltd has been accepted
 Henley & Partners Ltd, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as B-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! LaMona (talk) 21:36, 5 May 2016 (UTC)
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Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (July 19)
<div style="border: solid 1px #FCC; background-color: #F8EEBC; padding: 0.5em 1em; color: #000; margin: 1.5em; width: 90%;"> Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Dodger67 was:

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Roger (Dodger67) (talk) 15:57, 19 July 2016 (UTC)

July 2016
Your addition to Cypriot nationality law has been removed, as it appears to have added copyrighted material to Wikipedia without evidence of permission from the copyright holder. If you are the copyright holder, please read Donating copyrighted materials for more information on uploading your material to Wikipedia. For legal reasons, Wikipedia cannot accept copyrighted material, including text or images from print publications or from other websites, without an appropriate and verifiable license. All such contributions will be deleted. You may use external websites or publications as a source of information, but not as a source of content, such as sentences or images&mdash;you must write using your own words. Wikipedia takes copyright violations very seriously and persistent violators will be blocked from editing. S Philbrick (Talk)  14:29, 21 July 2016 (UTC)
 * I do understand that you are an employee of Henley, but you cannot simply copy material from their websites without arranging for permission. Let me know if you want to know how to do that although it is rarely the best step.-- S Philbrick (Talk)  14:30, 21 July 2016 (UTC)

Your draft article, User:Mara.ispas/sandbox


Hello, Mara.ispas. It has been over six months since you last edited your Articles for Creation draft article submission, "sandbox".

In accordance with our policy that Articles for Creation is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply and remove the  or  code.

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Boomer VialHolla! We gonna ball! 13:42, 4 April 2017 (UTC)

Quality of Nationality Index
What do you mean by blanking? If you want the page to be dlelted, please ask according to Wikipedia rules.Xx236 (talk) 11:43, 28 May 2018 (UTC)

Deleting a redirect
We have created a full entry for the Henley & Partners - Kochenov Quality of Nationality Index, titled same. There is currently a page called 'Quality of Nationality Index', which is directed to the Henley & Partners. We need to delete both the Quality of Nationality Index page and the redirect action. The Henley & Partners - Kochenov Quality of Nationality Index page should be the only entry for this index. Help? Baffled by the innerworkings of Wikipedia.

Speedy deletion nomination of Henley & Partners – Kochenov Quality of Nationality Index (QNI)


A tag has been placed on Henley & Partners – Kochenov Quality of Nationality Index (QNI), requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, group, product, service, person, or point of view and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and FAQ/Organizations for more information.

If you think this page should not be deleted for this reason, you may contest the nomination by visiting the page and clicking the button labelled "Contest this speedy deletion". This will give you the opportunity to explain why you believe the page should not be deleted. However, be aware that once a page is tagged for speedy deletion, it may be deleted without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag from the page yourself, but do not hesitate to add information in line with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. If the page is deleted, and you wish to retrieve the deleted material for future reference or improvement, then please contact the. power~enwiki ( π, ν ) 04:40, 12 June 2018 (UTC)

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