User talk:Maralia/Archive 11

Military history coordinator election
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Backstage at the Smithsonian Libraries
Backstage at the Smithsonian Libraries is part of Wikipedia Loves Libraries 2012, the second annual continent-wide campaign to bring Wikipedia and libraries together with on-site events. Running this fall through October and November, libraries (and archives) will open their doors to help build a lasting relationship with their local Wikipedian community.

Organized by Wikimedia DC, this event will take place on October 12, 2012, and will include new editor training, a "backstage pass" tour of the National Museum of Natural History, and an edit-a-thon. Everyone is welcome to attend!

Kirill [talk] 18:46, 10 September 2012 (UTC)

Wikipedia Loves Libraries: Backstage at the Smithsonian Libraries
Thank you for signing up for Wikipedia Loves Libraries: Backstage at the Smithsonian Libraries. We are delighted that you will join us. In order to expedite the security process to enter the museum, would you please email your real name (and that of Friend of Maralia) to snyders(at)si.edu as soon as you can? Your personal information will never be shared on Wikipedia; it is simply so that museum security can put you on our guest list.

Our group will be meeting in front of the Constitution Avenue entrance to the National Museum of Natural History at 9:30 a.m. sharp this Friday, Oct. 12. Please bring a photo ID, a laptop if you have one (a limited number of library computers will be available if you do not have a laptop), and a willingness to share and learn. Thanks to the generosity of the Smithsonian Libraries leadership and the Wikimedia DC chapter, snacks, drinks, and lunch will all be provided to you, free of charge, as a way of thanking you for your participation. See you Friday!Sarasays (talk) 19:41, 10 October 2012 (UTC)

You're welcome
You're very welcome for the picture of the anchor. If you run across anything else at The Mariners' Museum that you need a picture of, just let me know. Neochichiri11 (talk) 02:37, 1 November 2012 (UTC)

Welcome back
Your name popped up on my watchlist today for the first time in, well, a few years. I'm glad to see you editing again. Ed [talk] [majestic titan] 23:03, 5 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Ah, did you catch me dropping cites onto Washington? I've been working on HMT Bedfordshire, so I have a stack of Very Large Books about WWII. Felt like I should share instead of just working on my pet article, so I picked Washington at random and cited a few facts. Dunno what you're working on at the moment, but I have the bottom 3 books listedhere and am desperate for a break from Hubble Space Telescope willing to do lookups if you have a WWII ship article in the works. Maralia (talk) 01:20, 6 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Yes I did! I'm (slowly) working on User:The ed17/Sandbox/Pennsylvania class battleship, but I'm also editing the Signpost now, so my writing time is limited. You may be interested in seeing South American dreadnought race, though. Is there anything from Rohwer about the actions of South American ships during the war? Also, Sturmvogel_66 may be interested in Blair's information. :-) Thanks, Ed [talk] [majestic titan] 02:37, 6 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Rohwer is a bitch: the detail is amazing, but it's strictly chronological. It's best suited for finding actions on a specific date, or for a specific ship (via the ship index); there's really no way to look up actions across a theatre.
 * None of the 8 ships in your table is listed in the ship name index. I looked up South American ships I found in our WWII categories, and managed to find mentions of the following:
 * Brazilian survey ship Rio Branco, corvettes Carioca and Caravelas (p. 193)
 * Argentine destroyer Corrientes & Argentine cruiser Almirante Brown (p. 90)
 * Brazilian destroyers Marcilio Dias, Mariz e Barros and Greenhalgh (p. 278)
 * Brazilian transport Vital de Oliveira and sub-chaser Javari (p. 278)
 * Let me know if any of those are of interest. There may well be more, but I'll need ship names to find them.
 * I'll ping Sturm to check out this thread. Maralia (talk) 04:50, 6 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Alright- is there anything on Bahia's explosion on 4 July 1945? Thanks very much. Ed [talk] [majestic titan] 04:57, 6 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Nothing on Bahia; only thing related is a brief note on 10 July that "The German U-boat U-530 enters Mar del Plata in Argentina after its operation off the US East Coast." (p. 359).Maralia (talk) 05:08, 6 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Damn, that's surprising. Thanks anyway, Maralia. :-) Ed [talk] [majestic titan] 05:39, 6 November 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for your kind offer; I've got Blair's second volume. I don't know that I'll be needing any lookups in the near future, but I'll keep your kind offer in mind if I do.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:27, 6 November 2012 (UTC)

Thanks
Hi, I wanted to thank you for your wonderful review of the Crucifixion and Last Judgement diptych. It's been a challenging article and your suggestions were necessary to bring the last few bits of structure into place. It's much better now, and I needed your comments to see what had to be done there. Truthkeeper (talk) 23:16, 9 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Ditto, the review was very helpful and very much appreciated. I well remember (gets out pipe and slippers) the Garden of Earthly Delights nom, the feedback there was great, a good example of when wiki works best (for me, har!). Best. Ceoil (talk) 06:29, 10 November 2012 (UTC)

Talkback
TheOriginalSoni (talk) 19:39, 11 November 2012 (UTC)

Thanks and welcome back
Thank you for all the work you've put in to creating high-quality content. I saw you were interested in medicine and FAs so I thought you might be interested in commenting at Peer review/Deep vein thrombosis/archive3. I hope to make it my first FA, with pulmonary embolism a likely second, as many sources overlap. Thanks. Biosthmors (talk) 05:00, 12 November 2012 (UTC)

Dromedary FAC
Hi Maralia! You left comments on the Dromedary FAC page, and you are right that who wrote it is not a native English speaker. But from these comments it seems the article should step down from FAC and receive a copyedit first, perhaps I could retry later. I am not experienced about FAC (I don't know if you are), so could you please suggest what I ought to do in this case? Sainsf &lt;^&gt; Talk all words02:43, 14 November 2012 (UTC)
 * My advice, as someone who has been pretty heavily involved in FAC, is that it would be wise to withdraw the nomination and focus on getting a good copyedit or two. You want FAC reviewers to be able to focus on the content, sourcing, and presentation of the article; right now, the prose issues are a distraction. You can choose to leave the FAC open, but I don't think the reviews you get will be very helpful.
 * If you decide you want to withdraw the nomination, I can help close it; just let me know. Thanks. Maralia (talk) 03:39, 14 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Yes, I want to withdraw this nomination, the sooner the better. I would rather rewrite or ask copyedits peacefully, not with the FAC open. Thanks. Sainsf  &lt;^&gt; Talk all words 08:58, 14 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Okay, I've archived the nomination as withdrawn. Please leave the FAC template on the article talk page for now (a bot will come through and remove it, as well as update the article history). Good luck, and I hope to see the article back at FAC after some cleanup.
 * Thanks for being so reasonable—not everyone is, and it's both noticed and appreciated. Maralia (talk) 14:12, 14 November 2012 (UTC)

Holy Guacamole
Girl, where have you been ? It's a whole new world in here, so put on your lead asbestos suit and don't let anything surprise you! I was swamped all spring, summer and fall, but I now I have a Whole New Garden ... re-landscaped three sides of the house, still have to do the front next spring, but I hope to be able to take a break over the winter. Welcome back !!!! Sandy Georgia (Talk) 04:59, 15 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks! I finally planted our front flowerbed this year, and it was lovely if I do say so myself, but I rather neglected it from July onwards after I found out the hard way that I am now allergic to bees, the little bastards. I went to a wiki event last month (couldn't resist the chance to get into a rare book library at the Smithsonian) and have been puttering around here ever since. Have been concentrating on expanding a pet article, cleaning up articles I worked on back in the day, reviewing some FACs, and handling some of the FAC maintenance stuff I used to do for you (finding incomplete noms, withdrawals, etc). Doing my best to ignore most everything else :) Maralia (talk) 06:03, 15 November 2012 (UTC)
 * I just spent a brief few hours scanning the horizon, find medical articles still getting badly hit by poor student editing futhered by Foundation Education Projects (trying to keep medical articles clean made my editing time here unbearable, along with the Merry Band of Socks who tried a power play at FAC), and after glancing at a few FACs, I can see that as always, our delegates could use some experienced reviewers like yourself on board ! I'm sure they appreciate the routine maintenance stuff-- there's never been more than a small handful of editors (like you, DaBomb87 for example) who saw the work needed, and dug in to help wherever they could, and didn't mind doing the tedious stuff.  I chuckle when I realize that most current editors have no idea of what Gimme, you and I did on talk pages-- something they now take for granted.  I may have to ignore the entire medicine realm if classes keep hitting medical articles with bad edits, which we are hardpressed to clean up because the students have staff backing.  I planted more than a few flower beds ... And I still have a good back in spite of the summer !  Best,Sandy Georgia  (Talk) 06:44, 15 November 2012 (UTC)

Re: Charles Whitney Gilmore
Not really sure about books off the top of my head, I'd have to go hunting through my own databases... I can never figure out the damned shortened journal names in citations, is it the Proceedings of Geological Society of America, correct? I'll see if I can hunt it down through my alma mater. Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs ( talk ) 04:41, 20 November 2012 (UTC)

Priyanka Chopra FA
I don't understand something. You removed the nomination from the talk page but there still exist two articles: Featured article candidates/Priyanka Chopra/archive1 andFeatured article candidates/Priyanka Chopra/archive2. Can you get rid of those also. I do not think it is ready for FA because: It just passed GA, it has some comments for improvements on the talk page, it is a target for vandalism, I need to find out more about the FA process first. Can you help with this last part too? It looks like you succeeded in an FA before, right? BollyJeff &#124;  talk  02:16, 26 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Hi. I was trying to give Green Parakeet some time to respond to me and to talk with you and other significant contributors. As he hasn't responded, I tagged the /archive2 page for deletion just now. I will take care of the other one as well.


 * Regarding a future FAC for this article, I would not be concerned about vandalism as long as it's not the target of constant edit-warring. There are two things that I definitely recommend before FAC, though:
 * 1. You should review the sources used and make sure you're confident they meet WP:RS. We don't have a lot of Indian actress FAs, so most reviewers are likely to be unfamiliar with the sources, and this will likely be brought up at FAC for confirmation.
 * I have been cleaning up the sources, and wikilinking them to show that they are notable and reliable. There are a few that I still need to replace. Anything else I can do on that front? BollyJeff &#124;  talk  05:46, 28 November 2012 (UTC)
 * I'm glad you are reviewing the sources. Wikilinking them only shows that they have a Wikipedia page, though, which at best means that they are notable; it doesn't speak to their reliability either way. I would suggest starting with a list of sources used, and reviewing them one by one to make sure no tabloids etc. have slipped in. (If you look at the FAC for Preity Zinta, for example, you will see what I am trying to avoid with proper preparation.) I have made the list and will post it on the article talk page for discussion there once I've done a little research.Maralia (talk) 18:09, 28 November 2012 (UTC)
 * 2. You should have the article copyedited, perhaps through WP:GOCE. This is important for a couple of reasons: it's hard to catch errors in your own writing or in something you've read hundreds of times; and also there are some portions of the article that read as though they were written by a non-native speaker.
 * I did put in a request there, but it seems like it could be a while if/before it is looked at. BollyJeff  &#124;  talk  05:46, 28 November 2012 (UTC)
 * It's true that it may take some time to get a full copyedit, but I really feel that it is necessary, and it will take some time to review the sources anyway. No need to rush, right?Maralia (talk) 18:09, 28 November 2012 (UTC)
 * I hope this helps; let me know if you have any other questions for me. Maralia (talk) 03:40, 26 November 2012 (UTC)
 * I guess its more fanboy than vandalism. Anyway, the FA archive 1 is still there.  BollyJeff  &#124;  talk  05:46, 28 November 2012 (UTC)
 * I posted a clarification at the /archive1 page to make sure anyone who sees it understands that the nomination was never really open and the page exists only for historical purposes.Maralia (talk) 18:09, 28 November 2012 (UTC)

I have posted my review of the sources at the article talk page, so you can consider those suggestions while waiting on the copyedit.Maralia (talk) 00:49, 3 December 2012 (UTC)

Featured article candidates
Hi Maralia,

Thank you for archiving the She Has a Name FAC for me. I nominated 2012 tour of She Has a Name for FAC today, and was informed by SandyGeorgia that I am not eligible to do so for another two weeks. If I have misunderstood the guidelines on this issue, would you be willing to withdraw my new nomination or tell me how to do so myself?

Neelix (talk) 23:42, 3 December 2012 (UTC)


 * Oh, yes that does mean a two-week wait after an archived nomination. Sometimes the delegates waive that period; if you feel strongly about it you can ask at WT:FAC. I've taken care of stopping the FAC for now. Because no actual review happened this time, we don't need to keep a record of it, so I've removed the FAC template from the article talk page and it is okay to overwrite the same nomination page when the time comes to re-nominate the article. Good luck! Maralia (talk) 15:11, 4 December 2012 (UTC)


 * Thanks very much for the help! I got an article featured back in 2008, but I haven't had any involvement with FACs since, so I greatly appreciate your explanations. Neelix (talk) 02:33, 5 December 2012 (UTC)

Priyanka Chopra FAC
Sorry for late reply....lets talk about work....hmmmm....yes I do feel the article has certain flaws. Pls lets talk on Chopra talk pageGreen Parakeet (talk) 04:10, 4 December 2012 (UTC)

Re : FAC
Hello, Thanks a lot for the advice. I have completed the nomination process of Jainism. I am relatively new at editing Wikipedia, so any help throughout the process or any feedback on the article would be greatly appreciated. Rahuljain2307 (talk) 07:14, 6 December 2012 (UTC)

Big Two-Hearted River
Maralia, i hate to be a pest but got a bit carried away on the Hemingway page, and might need you to come in a sweep up, post me. The usual stuff, changing "hte" to "the", things like that. Best and tks, I'll pay you back with a pint of guiness one of these days. Ceoil (talk) 21:02, 9 December 2012 (UTC)
 * Okay, will take a look through it again once I've got the boy off to bed. Seems like absinthe or brandy or somesuch would be more apropos, but I confess I'd prefer the Guinness anyhow.Maralia (talk) 00:48, 10 December 2012 (UTC)
 * "absinthe or brandy"? Yikes! I enjoy a sherry on thanks giving or chrismas day, but my, kudos:) Anyways, hope you can watch I dont make such a mess of TKs page, but no rush with this one.Ceoil (talk) 02:15, 10 December 2012 (UTC)
 * Hah, you misread me: they would be more appropriate, but I'm not going there either! I've done my cleanup pass, this time section-by-section with good edit summaries. The last one in particular (to the lead) mentions something that's been bugging me. Maralia (talk) 15:21, 10 December 2012 (UTC)
 * Ok thank (again). Will take a look tonight. Ceoil (talk) 19:37, 14 December 2012 (UTC)

DC Meetup #33
December 10 is Ada Lovelace's birthday! Not only was she the world's first computer programmer, but also the world's first female open source developer! Come celebrate withWikimedia District of Columbia at Busboys & Poets for an informal get together!

The Washington, DC event will be held on Monday, December 10, 2012 at Busboys & Poets on 5th St NW & K St NW near Mt Vernon Square. The area is easily accessible by the Red Line Chinatown stop and the Yellow Line and Green Line Mt Vernon Square stop, as well as by WMATA buses.

Kirill [talk] 14:10, 10 December 2012 (UTC)

Wikimedia DC Holiday Party and Wiki Loves Monuments Exhibition
Please join Wikimedia DC and four other local media nonprofits—the National Press Club's Young Members Committee, 100Reporters, IRE and the Fund for Investigative Journalism—in winding down another year with a night of well-mannered frivolity.

The festivities will take place on Friday evening from 6:30 PM to 9:00 PM in the Zenger Room on the 13th Floor of the National Press Club, located on 529 14th Street NW, near Metro Center. There will be meat and vegetarian appetizers as well as a cash bar with specially reduced drink prices all night long. In addition, we will be exhibiting the finalists of the Wiki Loves Monuments photo contest at the event.

Hope to see you there! Kirill [talk] 04:34, 13 December 2012 (UTC)

California State Route 56
Hi! Ian recommended you as a copyeditor, and this article is at FAC and needs a quick look over before promotion. Would you mind taking a look at it? --Rschen7754 22:53, 19 December 2012 (UTC)
 * Hi again! Do you think you'll have a chance to take a look soon? (I know you've been off for the holidays - no worries). --Rschen7754 09:33, 3 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Sorry I've not been around. Family obligations have kept me tied up for the past month (who has their last holiday get-together on January 5th? My family), and I learned yesterday that the 'sprained' ankle I've been hobbling around on for the same time is actually fractured, so I am off to meet an orthopedic surgeon shortly. I'm afraid you shouldn't count on me for this one. Very sorry to renege on a commitment at such a late date. I have just asked a friend to step in, if he has the time. Maralia (talk) 16:32, 8 January 2013 (UTC)
 * I understand. Thanks anyway! --Rschen7754 08:38, 9 January 2013 (UTC)