User talk:Marc Dozier

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82.216.177.22 (talk) 19:05, 2 June 2014 (UTC) Dear Joe, Sorry for disturbing you. I'm not sure i'm writing you on the proper way. Thank you for your work and reviewing the article about Mundiya Kepanga. Could you give me some advise to make it better. I'm sorry, i'm not very experienced. Do you think that there are peacocks (i just discover this word) ? I think the reference are independent and numerous enought. Are the reference ok for you ? Best regards, 82.216.177.22 (talk) 19:05, 2 June 2014 (UTC) Marc Dozier
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Hello,

I changed the text of this article. I removed words that could be considered like Peacocks. I hope it will be fine.

Thanks in advance,

Best regards,

Marc

82.216.177.22 (talk) 17:30, 3 July 2014 (UTC)