User talk:Marcus Lancelot/Home automation/Josepazmino Peer Review

Jose's peer Review
Hello Marcus I want to share an idea with you about your article. I believe as an Wikipedia article's should be more direct the first paragraph. I remove the fist line to make it more direct to the Wikipedia's users.

Home Automation is a Smart Home Technology term that gives to the basic home appliances and systems the option to be automate or control remotely through interconnected internet. Such home appliances like TV, sound system, washing machines, refrigerators, cookers, vacuum cleaners, home entertainment systems, home security systems, air-conditioning system, and home lighting system. A few of these, do not require electricity to work, but use solar energy to charge battery and enable the user to customize performance. The process of converting home to a smart home could be expensive upfront, but is equally rewarding knowing that the owner has a sense of security by controlling some if not all of home systems remotely, use the appliances efficiently by lowering energy costs, raise the value of home, and have an eco-friendly and cost-friendly home using the latest advanced technology.